Wednesday, December 6, 2006

Tell Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tell me I wasn't true
Tell me I didn't believe in you
Tell me a moment I didn't share
Tell me when I acted like I didn't care
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Tears From A Soldiers Eyes
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Jeanette Krantz 09 February 2007

this one caught and kept my attention until the end its so sad how ppl treat each other....or how we don't appreciate what we have until its too late

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Deanna More 06 February 2007

. Sensing negativity towards you, (in actions + attitude) , from a girl, you love + care for - is a hard burden to bear, especially when this person is, obviously, in DENIAL. 'Tell me...Tell me....Tell me....' and your response to her be...''You're wrong! ! ! ! '' Favorite line? Last line! ''What I'm seeing, 'I feel 'like you're telling me all of that.'' (Clever wording!) Excellent poem! Really stirs the emotions. Deanna xx

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