Thursday, February 18, 2010

Tell Me... Comments

Rating: 4.8

do i need eyes if they can't
shed one meaningful tear?
do i need lips if they can't
stretch in one spontaneous smile?
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indira babbellapati
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Leonard Dabydeen 24 February 2010

Very sensitive. Touching. Full of life. A verse of nine lines and the word 'can't' pops up four x, and you're asking: tell me. i will only cry if you cry with me only smile if you smile with me how must I know please tell me. Thnx for sharing. Blessings. Leonard

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Lady Grace 21 February 2010

owwwww...very nice.very smart..i need to tell you all of these coz my eyes never lie, my lips will always tell the truth...lavs ya...smileeeeeeeeeeee

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 20 February 2010

Hmmm your poetry has told it eloquently-mute and subsubtly…words are not worth! ! 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Joseph Poewhit 18 February 2010

Isn't life just beautiful.

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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