Tell Me Comments

Dear Mari - You are a beautiful poet and a beautiful person and you pose your readers an emotive question in a very evocative Love Poem - TELL ME. The structure and content are praiseworthy and prizeworthy - TEN. V 1,2,3 We all have sadness - we all need to have our minds renewed. When we meet someone who dooes just that - we reward them with a kiss We know that that first very special kiss 'overwhelms us with desire' we immediately 'take each other to our hearts' and the wonderful 'symbiosis of love' begins. V 3,4,5 When two passionate poetic people fall in love 'symbiotically' they become 'one being' 'in a moment of self forgetfuness (self abnegation) '. Because of the cohesive power of the love 'We both abandon our dreams to be together'. Please answer my question Mari - Would you be prepared to break down 'All walls of personal identity' to co-metamorphise into one being with your true love? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? Thank you for sharing your lovely heart in this poem Mari - It is a mind changing sonnet. Love you in Poetry - JOHN X .

‘…And if I would wish to be gone // in that moment, // tell me if you would have felt so sorrow that // you would have abandoned your dreams // to be with me....’ Surely... never one will abandon such a Lover…at least I’ll not and never… fantastic poem….crafted bead by bead by love droplets from pristine heart… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

lines flows freely, really a great love poem 10

brings emotions to the fore - Beautifully expressed 10

Beautiful, poignant, it touched me.......... 10

Nice poem. Well penned 10

Tell me that you knew that I knew this, the proof was that I could let you go, by being unable to break the wall to be together..... marvelous... and perfect poem is this one.. style here is unique and very much soul touching..frank, free and targetted idea.. welll done mari..you are really doing a greattt job.. impressive..10/10

A poem that comes straight from the heart and is numbing in the intensity of its yearning.10 of course.

deep sensibility lovely to read 10

‘Tell me if I would twist your thoughts with my sadness, your kiss would bend me to be deeply overwhelmed.’ Very nice ‘and smooth take-off’. Indeed great learning for me in placement of words. Twisting thoughts! Ten point zero / Ten a must for me and who loves poetry. [ILYP = I Love Your Poem] dr. sakti

An excellent poem! Nice construction. Very unique!