Telephone Comfort. Comments

Interesting poem, although I'm not sure about your use of the word 'retorting'- it implies that the voices are arguing to a degree with one another. So that retorting to a mere 'pondering' (which is casual and thoughtful conversation) sounds a bit harsh. I'm also a bit unsure as to how the first stanza fits in with the rest of the poem. Care to fill me in? The images are working well here though.

Excellent, Mary. Unique......new.....a work of art. Love, Fran xx