Thursday, December 4, 2008

*** Telepathy *** Comments

Rating: 4.3

TELEPATHY

The lovers,
pining, separated
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ANJALI SINHA
COMMENTS
Subhas Chandra Chakra 14 April 2016

The spiritual part of the poem... The lovers, pining, separated no proximity by an interstellar distance., Still their heart’s antenna receives each other’s passions in an instant, for they have committed a grave love crime, that manacles their heart with invisible twaddle of love’s lines. An uninterrupted connection not severed even when they bathe or dine. You proved that Scientists or students of any faculty can be good poets.. These lines are those lemmas... The heavenly broadband transmits Images, emotions and passions, Without earthly eyesores tall towers and stoic stations. The delectable divine lines carrying Sensual waves reverberating in dancing motions ringing other’s hearts stirring their emotions. Thanks for the amalgam of beauty, intelligence and emotions in the most perfect proportions. Subhas

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Anand Madhukar 12 October 2009

A wonderfully romantic piece.

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 19 September 2009

Incurably romantic! Beguilingly passionate! ! Ten compulsively dr. sakti

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Allemagne Roßmann 14 April 2009

Come let us share our loneliness Come let us end this jinx of shyness This shyness...mine..yours across the distance measured in oceans....yes measured it can be in my strings, in your dreams of love, in my eyes which is rendezvous in this ambience with some unknown music of heartbeats., this moment with the momentum of my heart, this mind sometimes passionate this soul all compassionate this body as the captive of dreams, sleeping in your dreams of love, weaved in my eyes is your dreams Every moment of life was this lonely As there was gloomy obscurity everywhere In reticence i was alone and unsure, of any usher, of rains, of any twilight weaved in my dreams And as i found you, and you invented me those lost fragrance, those lost ambience, in my silence i have lost my long prevailing loneliness Wish i now always live, and my dreams weave under your tresses, the cascading fountains of love and now am sure i can forsake the entire world and never think of it when you are with me and let the ambience, this moment of truth which i always longed for in those darkness, in these silence narrate our silhouette of silence in this ambience. I am just carried away by your words. I dedicate the above words to you endorsed by your grandfather and may his sould rest in peace.Let me pray for him and stand by the side of her bereaved daughter, my mom. +++++++++10 back to the world again.

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Wojja Fink 31 March 2009

ethereal magic...beautiful...

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Muhammad Ali 24 March 2009

Super scientfic description of love, yes it is natural theme and you are right Anjali 10

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Mahfooz Ali 22 February 2009

Hey! Microbiologist........... dats Y I was having telepathy dat u r doing dissection on me......... in ur lab......... and I ve telepathed dat U r playing wid my heart........ rolling it over in ur hands................

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Vaibhav Pandey 10 February 2009

a brilliant poem.....title is perfect for the poem.......I quite liked it.

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Eyan Desir 01 February 2009

.... hmm sweet nice write

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Truthful Light Treeclimber 04 January 2009

wowza sometimes i wish the telepathy thing would turn off just for a brief moment where i could think of one i'm not supposed to be thinking of...beautifully written and executed a lightning boldt to the heart

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Anjali You have a wonderful vocabulary and I loved the concept of this poem. Very well written. Thank you.......Karin Anderson

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Ridge Cahill 16 December 2008

The intrusive enigmatic connection remains, indeed - well said and well done.

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Ravi Sathasivam 16 December 2008

Nicely composed. Powerful poem Amazing. Thanks for sharing with me

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Shalabh Gupta 15 December 2008

Love powered hotline, heavenly broadband.....too gud, never thought of it before. keep up the gud work. kudos 2 u...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 December 2008

between amother and infant we have heard of- this seems a ever connected hotline nice write-10

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premji premji 13 December 2008

anju... you are that...that love...that nothingness... a dropp in that ocean...the supreem soul.... i do not know your face...but i know you... beautiful thought....10 votes...

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nature 360 12 December 2008

'TELEPATHY' Interesting vibes with nature. Lol How you cipher so many wavelengths interwoven within the divine knowledge? Let me imagine.

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Ajith Patnaik 12 December 2008

oh wow! more i go thru ur poems better they're gettin. u're poems make my heart beat a few times faster....great! ! !

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Brandon Edwards 10 December 2008

hi cool like it good work can up with job

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Sarah Sisson 09 December 2008

Wow...powerful...10......

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