Thursday, October 10, 2024

Teeth Biting Tongue Comments

Rating: 5.0

With every lie born on a trembling tongue,
my sharp-edged teeth, bite a piece out,
Oh, the pain of words unworthy spoken,
a battle fought, but the trust is broken,
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M. Asim Nehal
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 20 October 2024

Mirror of honesty and bridge of grace........Brilliant poem Asim ji.....10 + Favourite

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 20 October 2024

I feel yr pain Asim Bravo and TFS

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Rob Lamberton 19 October 2024

Significant!

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Bri Edwards 11 October 2024

Asim, I have NEVER told a lie! ! ! OUCH! ! ! And I have NEVER bitten my tongue! Ouch. OUCH! ! ! And I have NEVER, ever, bitten my lip! ! ! OUCH.....bri ;)

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Sandra Feldman 11 October 2024

Impressive and unforgettable poem, a human gain for everyone that reads. Full marks+

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Sandra Feldman 11 October 2024

Seems so hurtful and impossible that even in deaf ears it always rings. Such a deep, intense and heartfelt poem calling for truth and peace. Simply, magnificently beautiful and so touchingly sincere

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Sandra Feldman 11 October 2024

The search for truth that will peace bring

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Nabakishore Dash 11 October 2024

Despite the teeth bitten by the tongue, they make understanding and stay together in the same cavity.But lies from tongue disturbs peace in the world.A wise tongue is good for all of us to speak the truth and sweet words. Nicely written poem.

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Poetic Sky 10 October 2024

Wonderful poem 💖

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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