With every lie born on a trembling tongue,
my sharp-edged teeth, bite a piece out,
Oh, the pain of words unworthy spoken,
a battle fought, but the trust is broken,
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Asim, I have NEVER told a lie! ! ! OUCH! ! ! And I have NEVER bitten my tongue! Ouch. OUCH! ! ! And I have NEVER, ever, bitten my lip! ! ! OUCH.....bri ;)
Impressive and unforgettable poem, a human gain for everyone that reads. Full marks+
Seems so hurtful and impossible that even in deaf ears it always rings. Such a deep, intense and heartfelt poem calling for truth and peace. Simply, magnificently beautiful and so touchingly sincere
Despite the teeth bitten by the tongue, they make understanding and stay together in the same cavity.But lies from tongue disturbs peace in the world.A wise tongue is good for all of us to speak the truth and sweet words. Nicely written poem.
Mirror of honesty and bridge of grace........Brilliant poem Asim ji.....10 + Favourite