Thursday, March 30, 2017

Teens Of The New Generation Comments

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We're just a couple of rejects and outcasts
Haunted by the ghosts of our pasts
We never knew that life would be so systematic
"Don't color outside the box", well imagination is what they lack
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Darwin Henry Beuning 25 July 2017

Jeremy, Lovely poem. I am surprised that there are no comments! ! . I would suggest a change to the title. This came to me after reviewing your poem. Tears Of The New Generation. I rate a 10.

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Jeremy Willson 26 July 2017

Thank you so much! I don't get many comments don't really know why. I appreciate the recommendation to change the name of the poem but the purpose of it is to show strength and resolution in the fact that we are the future and even though we may be different we have views and opinions that matter. If I changed it to Tears of the new generation the feeling it would give off would make teens seem a bit put down which we are but in a way that makes us angry not sad. Again thank you for reading and if you enjoyed this poem I guarantee you'd like more of my work check it out if you'd like! 😊

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