Teenager feelings changing my life
making me love the sky
Sweet feelings complete my days
Taking my breath away
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A real refreshing piece of art. I wish you will keep the warm red heart of teenager no matter what age you are-all the best. :)
You have captured the feelings of love for all ages. Love feels the same at any age. It is just that teenagers are fresh in their senses and emotions. Your emotions are fresh indeed. Wonderful! GW62
I really liked your poem. I have been writing for over 20yrs and this is better than alot of experienced writers write. Keep up the good work.: -)
Great piece, teens from all over the world would agree with you here Syrian, it's the parents they love to disagree with......keep expressing your youthful wisdom best wishes Jon
lovely piece, it is absoultely an imitation of our inner feelings,