Thursday, February 18, 2010

Teenage Pregnancy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Giving birth at a tender age was not my intention,
How did this happen to me is still a confusion.
'Pregnant', me ha! never!
But his charming looks and boy was he clever.
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Amara Shengbe 24 October 2019

The poem is so, so educative. I will like to use it in school clubs here in Sierra Leone in order to raise the awareness of girls about the lasting effect teen pregnancy will have on them. Thanks and stay blessed An

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Anita Khelawan 26 October 2019

Thank you so much and you are more than welcome to use it. Have a wonderful day

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Kaja Alfred 13 October 2019

Danny is a monster I pray god be there for you and your baby....

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Naila Rais 20 September 2018

Soooo sad.................. Keep courage..........10 Naila

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Chinedu Dike 28 June 2018

Deep and passionate write. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Anita and do remain enriched.

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Anitah Muwanguzi 05 April 2016

This is incredible Anita, and yes getting pregnant in school or unmarried is one fear most of us have growing up.

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Kewayne Wadley 16 February 2016

I love the amount of craft you put into this. Your storytelling ability is amazing! The outside view of the characters then bringing us to a closer view. Superb! I hate the outcome and we do need to spread more Awareness as it happens everyday. Great piece! KW

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Anita Khelawan 16 February 2016

thnx you for your lovely response.... this is my 1st and only fictional poem.. :)

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 February 2016

VERY common in the world. However, we have to change towards righteous works. Thanks for sharing.

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Atasha Williams 15 February 2016

Woww... This is is deep.... Your words are vivid and strong.

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I will add this to my poem list to share with young girls and help to prevent these great tragedies called rape and teen age pregnancy.

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A sad story surging with significance and loaded with lessons learnt. This should be required reading for all teen aged girls...

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Enoch John 24 December 2015

wow! quite a poem, yes.here the poet is obviously writing from experience.

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Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2015

Great work! With the muse of life common to the youth. As seen all over the world. Thanks for sharing.

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Ash .... 21 August 2013

your poem speaks volume and i must saying it's moved my heart

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Luz Hanaii 21 July 2011

What a hard experience, I'm sure you have had to mature real fast with such an experience. Very touching poem. Best to you and your baby.

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