Monday, March 21, 2005

Teenage Nomad Comments

Rating: 3.3

The grass is greener over there,
Can’t you smell that clean fresh air,
I’ll jump that fence without a care,
For the grass is greener over there.
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Scarborough Gypsy
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Nimal Dunuhinga 06 March 2006

Life looks better sometimes S.G., I always prefer nomadic themes and I too like to jump over that fence............teenage is the best period of life.I like this poem very much.

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Scarlett Treat 09 February 2006

Is there such a thing as a poet without a gypsy heart and soul and a wandering eye that always wonders what is on the other side. Our imiginations always take us 'where no man has gone before! ! ' The only problem is being able to get back where we started from. Sometimes we get lost! ! Scarlett

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Philippa Lane 25 March 2005

I like this poem a lot...can identify with your feelings. Particularly like the last stanza. Well done!

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