Teenage Love Story Comments

such dreams happen very often when the lovers desires are out in the open her face veiled the moon or not nor the sun could unveil dreams came to go away when i had a similar dream she showed her face i was dumbfounded such a beauty the moon fell shy and hid behind a cloud the gal also vanished in the crowd hit my guts so very loud I felt ashamed and feel till today was i for that moment insensibily lame the DREAM NEVER CAME AGAIN..All such imagery is alas in vain

A nice write. Keep it up... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me.. Naila

I appreciate the Poet's Notes. Well thought out. Love- physical, mental and spiritual along with respect for the spouse constitute a successful marriage. Intellectual compatibility is also a requisite.

A pure poetic thought. You may like to read my poem (Love and Lust) . Thanks

Yeah! Inshaa Allah...I will be back 😊

hahaha! No never 😂 @Sam Sam

Well self experience is sometimes better than someone's opinion.... So what if I ask about your self experience about this teenage love! Have you experienced it or is it just a fantasy?

You see how passionate love is and what it can do.

It is a beautiful and touching poem about passionate love by a nice fledgling poet. I loved reading it.

an everlasting flame.... this poem, an excellent feelings and lovely metaphor and nice cohesion...

a beautiful romantic poem and yes, as a teenager we see love like this

Lovely poem, and it tells truth about teenage love. Siya_! !

cute......being a teenager some feelings are equal to it

Nice poem. I like your poem.Ruma

i am a teenager, and I have left somethings for my age to come.

Once again... a new beautiful poem...yeh u are right about teenage love..... Want more fresh poems from you..

Elliot and Merrill, the great sociologists, have written a paper on this topic. Search their names at Wikipedia and read it. They have concluded that romance cannot be the basis of a successful marriage. Even if a romantic marriage is successful it is because the couple changed their romantic love in to conjugal affection. Romance dies a little time after marriage and those who search it in their conjugal life commit a blunder. The sociologists say in case of the couple committing this blunder, Romantic marriages will continue to end in romantic divorces. This nice poem reveals that you think. That is very very positive. Its your thinking that has made you the super most creature.