Saturday, November 1, 2008

Teenage Love Affair Comments

Rating: 5.0

To every breaking heart,
there was that one person who made it whole.
it's the fact that the love broke apart,
that took emotions to it's toll.
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Kathryn Marie Thurman
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Bonnie Collins 20 February 2009

Very nicely written about a subject that has perplexing generations for centuries... There is nothing as sweet and tender as your first love.. You will love again and life goes on its way, but deep in your heart man or woman, will always be the memorie of the first love with the heart break and all...... Very nicely written.. Bonnie

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Hunter Dasten 25 November 2008

I agree with Charlotte, I think the last stanza is elegant both in its sincerity and it's brevity. Good write, Kathryn. Keep it up!

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Charlotte Davis 01 November 2008

your last sentance is sooo true bueatiful work

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