Sunday, August 6, 2017

Teenage Longing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Teenage Longing

On your stringent grip, I hid
My teenage longing
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shakil ahmed
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Indira Renganathan 13 August 2017

Full of metaphors and highly enjoyable poem....thanks for sharing this awesome work...God bless you

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2017

Wet bird is a great simile. Thank you very much,

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Nosheen Irfan 07 August 2017

Amazing imagery to depict a long-lost love. An old memory coming back to life again. Puts the reader in nostalgic mood too. Just beautiful. A sure 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 August 2017

Nimble face is like the petals of rose. Teenage carries many memories of love. Teenage longing is well presented in this amazingly drafted poem. Love brings emotion.10

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shakil ahmed

shakil ahmed

Badarpur, Assam, India.
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