Saturday, October 6, 2007

Teenage Girl In Pain Comments

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I'm sat on the edge of my life
clinging onto the memorys that are full of happiness
the ones that could stop me from ending it..........
my family seem to confince me that I shouldnt do it
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Sarah Nugent
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Emily Oldham 10 May 2009

typical teen feelings, i can relate. try not to keep things bottled up, it just makes things worse. maybe you can tell them how bad things are for you? writing is always a help too. don't just end your life, its a waste of everything for you and most likely everyone that loves you. Hope things get better for you soon Athena x

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Jasmine Margetson 22 March 2008

i love this poem..i hits so close to home..the more they pull..the more the push you away..it hurts more and more..and the hardest things is to keep it bottled up..and its also the worst thing..and its sucks when all of your pain is from them that you endure..but the best thing you can do is find inner strength..don't mean to try and be the optimist but in actuality it works..but writing is the best way to vent i think..so if you can't tell them..i guess in a way thats why we're here.. from the home hitter jasmine

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Poison 9901 07 October 2007

I agree with Doc on this one, very sad that young adults are forced to sometimes make a decision between two people that they love. I dont agree with the keeping it bottled up inside, maybe if you told them what they are doing to you then, and only maybe then would they realize just how much pain that they are putting you thru. Ending your life, will not solve the problem. That would be like putting gas on a fire. Although you would not have to deal with the issues at hand anymore, the ones that truly love and care for you would be devastated by your actions. I truley hope that this is just a poem and not reality. If it is reality, Please reach out to someone. 'Keep on inking the Pages' Poison

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