Saturday, October 24, 2009

, ....Teenage Emotion On Loves Highway Comments

Rating: 2.9

Loves highway draws teenagers
....... on thru the night
.........Emotion lays heavy
.............in their hearts,
...
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Ken e Hall
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Sealed with a kiss, the end of his and Juliet’s flight In arms together to hold this very night... nice lines teenagers offer real sight of love and believe

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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 26 January 2011

being a teenager..i know how it is to be in love...and get opposition from parents...and how u go against the world to get what u desire.. I adore this poem...

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Kevin Carney 22 August 2010

So true on every line. The flow just floats as you read this. I was a little disapointed when it ended. I just wanted it to keep going on and on...Great write :)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 18 July 2010

True Love is ~ Beginningless ~ Endless ~ Timeless ~ Matchless ~ Buckleless ~ Brainless [sometime] ~ Sexless [Sapphism &C] ~ Geographical Boundarylees ~ Educationless ~ Statusless ~ Wealthless ~ Poveryless ~ Profitless ~ Idiologyless ~ Reckless and finally no Ex in it… congrats for sharing Sir Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Seema Chowdhury 16 April 2010

Excellent work! ! ! every word is so true. the flow is smooth too. Thanks a lot for sharing. take care

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Kesav Easwaran 08 March 2010

...'love knows no limits From young to old it abounds with gentle hands, For a loving heart so easy to dismantle and break. ‘You’re a Christian and he’s a Jew, ‘He’s so young and so are you’, ... These lines sound a bit autobiographical...the 'high way love drive' reads good...enables to sight a lot of avenue truth...10

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 03 February 2010

hmmmm.... well penned poem...

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Rachel Butler 05 November 2009

'The power of love envelopes their bodies' Rachel Ann Butler

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 November 2009

Too late the words to love filled ears Cupid’s arrow fell to younger years, , The wedding bells grew louder the chapel in sight Sealed with a kiss, the end of his and Juliet’s flight, In arms together to hold this very night..love knows no bounds and it is eternal and finds its own way inold or new fashion...lovely poem with clear marking of love....10 read mine ........love at first sight....mary to marry... anywhere..butterflies around

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Anjali Sinha 01 November 2009

you're a christian, he's a jew and I'm an hindu but love sees no caste, creed or color lovely poem dear Ken, whether teenagers or we adults all go on the same Loves Highway. +++++10 A++ anjali

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Patti Masterman 31 October 2009

Yes, they know everything at a certain age and you know nothing; and never the twain shall meet..it bears repeating, but your poem does a more succinct job of conveying the truth of the matter..(smile)

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Nikunj Sharma 30 October 2009

this on eis really hillarious, representing the rebellion of the youth, no matter how strong the winds of tradition are, they move on the highway......

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Ken e Hall

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