Teen Crisis Comments

Honest and heartfelt words, I myself have gone thru that phase in life, but as with everything, time heals. It's good that you turned to the only place I believe anyone can find peace an solace. An that is in God. Thank you for sharing

i like it. its honest and filled with emotion. its unstructured though which could be a good thing, that is to say stepping out of the confines of traditional poetry. it felt though at time you were just venting as if writing a journal, losing the poetic effect. but to me it was good because i read the entire piece twice.

This poem expresses intense feelings of being lost. Feeling lost is quite normal Anguish and fear assoicated with it is quite normal Sometimes noticing the 'small' blessings in life like a sunrise or the sound of the sea can really bring us back on track