Monday, March 26, 2012

Teen Aged Human... Comments

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The sleek bamboo shies away,
The stems of banana weep and cry,
Petals of chosen flowers hide and see,
How elegant you are at your teens, human.
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Subbaraman N V 29 July 2012

Nature is God and Mother giving us a lot of messages!

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Besa Dede 27 March 2012

This poem is very well written, with combining and comparing components to the nature of the human being, with the nature of things and objects that surround us. I like the metaphors you have used in this poem, they brighten your narration. I enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to your next ~Besa

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