The sleek bamboo shies away,
The stems of banana weep and cry,
Petals of chosen flowers hide and see,
How elegant you are at your teens, human.
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This poem is very well written, with combining and comparing components to the nature of the human being, with the nature of things and objects that surround us. I like the metaphors you have used in this poem, they brighten your narration. I enjoyed reading it. Looking forward to your next ~Besa
Nature is God and Mother giving us a lot of messages!