Wednesday, May 10, 2017

Teen Age Comments

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Sometimes a cradle,
Sometimes a cage,
Tears and smiles
Innocent teen age!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 20 May 2017

Nice ink.... Akhtarji....! As you say it is a time of storms and dreams! Teenage which most parents dismiss As an age of storm and stress When the young wants to be in glitz Is that which we aged badly miss.............

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 May 2017

A cradle! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Loke Kok Yee 13 May 2017

And it was all a masquerade As we reminisce in our old age Thank you sir-10

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Khalid Saifullah 10 May 2017

Interesting description of teen age................................

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