Friday, November 19, 2004

Teddy Comments

Rating: 3.5

I loved my parents that Spring day
and had no reservation.
Let me describe this if I may,
this time of admiration.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Rich Hanson 12 February 2005

We either become or rebel against our parents. or sadder still, we rebel against them and still become them. An excellent poem.

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. . 19 November 2004

Great story! But why do I get the feeling this has nothing to do with a dog? And Return comments are appreciated in lieu of votes(?)

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Herbert Nehrlich1 19 November 2004

Since the rating is indeed very arbitrary I would suggest to have co-poets make comments instead. This would be much more real and meaningful.Agree?

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