With only the crickets chatter
To keep me company,
The breaking dawn
Lets herself in
...
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Delightful! I can feel the luxurious quietness of the morning... and see the soft graying dawn in my mind’s eye... a special time of day for me... after all of the late night revelers have closed their doors and gone to sleep, and before the early morning risers have killed the quiet... the world is new and belongs to promise.
I just took a second tea spoon and found it sweeter than the first!
Bursting with beauty and impregnated with incredible imagery. Well done my friend.
A well painted word canvas of enlarging colours and images and possibilities. Measuring the morning in ever so even but tiny amounts to savour its rarity. Better than the sad use of coffee spoons in TS Elliot's Prufrock
Ah lovely....the changing season and inspiring time, such colors displayed in nature we feel in our life too...and i can see such colorful one in your work here...i loved the lightness you shared here..but please, dont smoking much okay, it is not good for health...enjoy your day! :) _SOul
The first and the last stanzas are simply fabulous! 'So I sit, and sip, and measure... my teaspoon thoughts' The poem ends with these amazing words, there couldn't be a better way of describing the 'teaspoon thoughts'.
Inspiration, delight, , quietness of the morning , dawn, incredible imagery. amazing words. teaspoon meditation. just wonderful thank you