Tease Your Grey Matter Comments

So keep going MAN this is your fate No time to brood and stretching hate. Lovely message...loved your message and the poem...well written. Live life without complaint and too short to brood over issues as all will be in vain...

Not hating is a very important component of life, life is more meaningful and you have explained it well.

Thanx for such an exquisite.Quite a good poem.depicts the mad rush in the modern urban civilization.In this Mechanic Age, we all rushing towards something unattainable.we all are running without knowing where are we going. regards.

Very sensible.......Thank you

I think this is Sharma philosophy 101. GW62

Acha. how true it is. God bless. Love.

Nice introspective and instructive poem, open verse suits you more, i think so....

Inspiring poem, Abha. Well said! Fx

Deep introspective penning. I agree with Mamta, similarities to the tone of poem. Great work. HG; -) xx

so keep going Man this is your fate-this line reminds me of Robert Frost's famous poem. thanks Abha

really brings out the whole in you. every person is born to search.good job

Mind over matter...thats the process of evolution... You have greatly captured your readers interest in here... Cate

Humans are born with a special set Something extra to compliment the rest These two lines reflect wonderfully that we have a nice gift hidden in us and we have to take it out. Very few people are able to recognize it. Well written.

My head is nothing but an empty shell Ever ready to let anything new inside Abhaji wonderful... Time is the only constraint But anyway I planned to read you complete

Ahhh, yes...indeed, the intrigue of the inexplicably mercurial human brain. Man and his science continue to set landmark progress in disentwining the threadings of the minds innerworkings....This topic facinates me to the marrow! Once again you impress, young lady, by displaying your unique penchant and natural largess for diversification, in expanding your theme-scope, and in crisp, smooth & erudite fashion. You have a Seer's sense as to what your readership craves....and you vacuum them in like bees to honey! Very Nice Work. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

Yes Abha, you said it right, go deep in to the grey matter, matter to mind, let brain clear all those grey, it is wise to go on the brighter pathways, demonstrative fluent concept, I liked the finish, perfect!

'Explore and travel the locale unknown Toil and sweat, make less forlorn Hide and seek the game designed Discover the hidden'... These lines constitute the sweet fruitful essence of this thought provoking poem. From ages to ages generation to generation humans have enthusiastically moved forward in search of truths and realities that lie hidden unknown... hatred notwithstanding, there is only less time for complaining, for more is inadequately required for fulfilling this long pursuit. A very good composition.*10*

It reads like the New Testament exhorting the youth to try and test and then accept. It is a great poetic rendering of dialectics of the materialistic growth. You have very deftly summed up the journey from the Paradise Lost to Marx. It will be remembered as a great contribution to poetic literature. The poem flows very well with perfect rhyme and rhythm.

wow! ! wonderful poetry.. ireally loved it.nice rhyming scheme too.keep writng

An interesting thought has been highlighted in this poem which is of being satisfied with what you got. Well written.