Tease Me Not! ! ! Comments

On the face of it so pleasing light and lovely...fine words.... superb sparkling string. Howevr i have an issue with the dichotomy in the eecond stanza. Also the useage of question marks in the last few lines, to me, defies logic. But poetry is always open to many interpretations, perhaps i am being obtuse. Blessings and cheers

Beautiful and well structured poem. Excellent.

And we all know you are the real friend. You are the best.

Impressive poem. The wisdom imbedded in these wonderous verses is great Love this poem

wow, very sweet poem...i like it..

wah wah! what a beauty......... kia baat hai. i am totally undiscernable about the feelings i have for this poem...................................

wowwww speechless.......... gr8 display of poet genius i like the structure so much in short phrases engulfed the whole poetic domain thumb up

Don't disturb The heart-sick men Joy's something they never find- Amazing insight A great write Shahzia

An emotional appeal with the touch of a strange authority. A poem with right properties and I once more begin to muse over how short things become very beautiful Thank you Shahzia for writing this piece.