Teary Advice Comments

My pearls When you weave With your rubies And emeralds Diamonds and topaz Leave for me Some lapis lazuli Nay the tears That flow on your cheek Once broken From the heart In the ocean of eyes Tears are pearls Diamonds and stone Precious and rare Break me not For the tears you shed My love I know In the existence dear Tears are friends My memories tomorrow Tears today Tears of separation We weave in sequels

Brilliant, I like how the tear talks and tries to ride of someones sorrow. Very individual and I like it,10

nice, I just wrote one about tears too, good stuff

Biologically speaking, a tear is meant to protect the eye, keeping it rolling and devoid of harmful substances. But we have grown to associate tears with sadness and – seldom – extreme happiness; at times neglecting that lack of tears could lead to blindness. Hence we say someone is blind when they don’t CRY for something considered invaluable. The title of the poem is a conundrum to what the poem really is about. Personally, I thought I would be reading about an advice from somebody crying. I say we should heed this advice for this simple reason. What if that tear you shed is actually your last drop…? ? ? Great personification displayed. Oh, by the way, your name is anagrammatic: Reshma; Ramesh

Simple and effective.

a nice monologue from a dropp of tear..........a 10.

Wow. This poem has a sweet innocence to it. Thank you.

the last two lines...very good...the most i liked 10

That is a poem! lol! Seriously. It's simple but the thought is delivered differently. It's good. You have to follow what the tear tells you to do.hehehe

simple and elegant i like it good bedtime story or luliby its very charming

Very nicely put together and a very pleasant read. I feel sorry for the tear because it is so sad. thankyou Regards Dave T