as my tears scream to be let loose
you pretend to be sorry
when you open a door
only a crack
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hello steph this is good poetry from one so young i'm impressed you seem to be mature for your nineteen years which can be scary for a mature human being such as i, being female doubles my fear had a look at your, what we discussed all i can say is very good warm regards AJS
I hope you let them loose and that they continue to nurture your poetry.