Friday, December 5, 2014

Tears'Re Treasures Comments

Rating: 5.0

Tears're my
Treasures
Tears I can't
Live without.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Ramesh Rai 07 December 2014

Life can not be irrigated without tears. Beautiful write sir.

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Ramesh Rai 07 December 2014

Life can not be irrigated without tears. Beautiful write sir.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 December 2014

In sadness They come as waves Of the ocean Cleaning the shore... nice lines...10 tears form and inform real feeling from within that is clearly felt and seen

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Valsa George 06 December 2014

Wear and tear Of grinding life Needs tears To lubricate. An excellent write! Enjoyed it much! A 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2014

Without tears Life's dry Like drought Affected land.- -very nicely envisioned. Many thanks sir.

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