Wednesday, January 9, 2019

Tears On Your Pillow Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the darkness of the night it hits most
How lonely I am without you here
We were as one always
Even our breaths were in tune
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Jennifer Birchall
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Julia Luber 01 March 2019

Beautiful poem about not feeling it right to subject somebody one loves to one's nightmares.

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Amir Marandi 18 January 2019

Beautiful poem about love, loss and grief. Sleeping is a way to escape from reality. When it is hard to face it, maybe that's the only way to deal with it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 January 2019

How lonely I am without you! ! Loneliness; Longing. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 January 2019

Loneliness due to loss of love has been painted beautifully on the canvas of this poem. Well crafted and conveyed.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 January 2019

Intensity of emotions flowing through out the life song is simply touching. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Jennifer Birchall

Jennifer Birchall

Cheshire, England
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