Sunday, September 8, 2013

Tears On Red Cheeks Comments

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Girl, wipe your tears and come
Black tears on the red cheeks
Sweet smile
Good moment, we can live
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Messaoud Allalouche
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Zion Anisius 05 September 2017

reading through this poem its kinda visible that its wriiten with some kind of pain true to ones real feelings and thoughts. isnt it? btw a good poem i like it

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Messaoud Allalouche 07 September 2017

yes my feelings were true and strong we are living between two pole pain and joy good and bad...and so on thank you very much Anna

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Unwritten Soul 08 September 2013

Dont ask God of what we can offer...Instead He gave us lot of things with choices...it just some human chose to be selfish and taken wrong choice to pick...Tears may falling down, let it down because it will clean all waste in heart and let eyes to see better when it stop...and no one will stop peace when it's time the cruel lost it throne...as black cloud will cry someday and left white cloud to taking over_Soul

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Messaoud Allalouche 07 September 2017

nice words Unwritten Soul thank you so much

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