Friday, August 1, 2008

Tears On My Pillow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pretending that I feel fine
A smile covers despair
Sadness is easily hidden
No one would be aware
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Falusi Mobolaji
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James B. Earley 18 August 2008

A passionate message of pain and sorrow....vividly expressed!

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Rachel The Hair Guru 04 August 2008

The words flow so beautifully. Nice work.

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foxy babii 02 August 2008

wow this is so true so me an so deep great poem i love it

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Bianca B. 01 August 2008

This poem is beautiful. Lovely!

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Katherine Sessor 01 August 2008

Beautiful poem! You express your feelings very well and have great imagery! I too, am sorry your sad. i know how you feel. Keep up the great writing! Kat, =)

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Jessica Frame 01 August 2008

wow. this poem is full of vulnerability... well written and expressed

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Israh Sadan 01 August 2008

A nice simple rhyme to express emotion very well. I'm sorry that you're so sad.

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