Pretending that I feel fine
A smile covers despair
Sadness is easily hidden
No one would be aware
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Beautiful poem! You express your feelings very well and have great imagery! I too, am sorry your sad. i know how you feel. Keep up the great writing! Kat, =)
wow. this poem is full of vulnerability... well written and expressed
A nice simple rhyme to express emotion very well. I'm sorry that you're so sad.
A passionate message of pain and sorrow....vividly expressed!