Wednesday, June 25, 2014

Tears Of The Heart Comments

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It's a night, covered by darkness.
Stars are nowhere to be seen.
The moon can't fight for light.
The wind is blowing so strong.
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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2014

i saw these comments after reading the poem...and bingo...the comments are perfect. i second my colleague Colleen Courtney. with these beautiful comments....it is indeed a v nice and touching poem liked Colleen Courtney (6/25/2014 6: 46: 00 AM) This is such a beautiful but heart wrenching poem! I wish that you would have included a poet's note though maybe telling us what kind of catastrophe this family was going through. Was it war? Tornado? Tsunami? I guess though it doesn't really matter. The whole point is the love that these parents have for their children. A well written piece. (Report)

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Kirti Sharma 25 June 2014

what a poem... it touched my heart.. i invite you to read my poems...

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Colleen Courtney 25 June 2014

This is such a beautiful but heartwrenching poem! I wish that you would have included a poet's note though maybe telling us what kind of catastrophe this family was going through. Was it war? Tornado? Tsunami? I guess though it doesn't really matter. The whole point is the love that these parents have for their children. A well written piece.

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