Tuesday, October 14, 2008

Tears Of The Candle Comments

Rating: 5.0

On my way to this world, I did first see your light
Light that guided the ways of the first pair of hands
that placed me on the bed, be at my mother's side
From the dark little world wherein, before, I was
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 27 February 2011

if you speak of God as the 'light'.... I hope you find Him again, sir... I've been a very philosophical person the past and had almost conformed completely to the theories of communism, rationalism, and existentialism but thank God I found Him again... anyway, the poem is narrated very well... thoughts and emotions well composed/presented in this poem... keep it up, sir!

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 October 2008

A nice poem with beautiful title. Last stanza is very nice.

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