Saturday, January 14, 2012

Tears Of Soldier Comments

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Militant minds
Beauty of the dream
In honor of the command our soul
was wounded.
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Makhosonke Dhlamini
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Briliant a superb reflection of the tears flowing down the chicks of a soldier.. I also have a poem of the same title, but I hail respect to yours, nice work... The_African_Son

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Alicia Meyers 25 January 2012

Good. :) A very good write, short, but good. :)

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Binish Cd 15 January 2012

word coming from the minds of a soldier., confused...who is the enemy? , and who is to be protected...........a very good write.......9

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Wahab Abdul 14 January 2012

our soul is wounded....really a very good poem....i like it very much dear poet...keep writing...please read my other poems

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Ramesh Rai 14 January 2012

Dave is right. i try to find out the real enemy but i do not find even a single one. every one whom i treat as enemy, is either biased or suffering from some complexities. A great poem with a great theme

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Dave Walker 14 January 2012

Really like this, a really great poem.

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Makhosonke Dhlamini

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Chris Hani Hospital (Soweto)
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