Thursday, October 22, 2015

Tears Of Sand Comments

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Whirlwinds dance,
Shrouded in sheets of humidity,
They stay in a trance of dance.
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Muhammad Shanazar
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Shakil Ahmed 22 October 2015

your translation has a rhythm of its own, i liked the poem and enjoyed reading the poem, well-composed, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your valuable comments.

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