His love was a raindrop
In the lonely desert sand.
The place that once was me,
Setting me free,
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I enjoy the tender touch of this one as well as the beautiful image of the unfolding of a wonderful event. The images are well chosen for their contrast.
Thus he nourished my soul, Making me whole, So our true love could reign. ................... this deeply touched me. a lovely write indeed...
very emotional n romantic poem, irene.....i feel it touches the metephysicality also; am i correct, dear? ? ?
Nice poem. Keep writing and sharing.