Thursday, May 9, 2013

Tears Of Ocean Comments

Rating: 5.0

If the ocean weeps
where it will find tears

When the sky weeps
it drizzles, commove in sky
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ramesh rai
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Unwritten Soul 02 June 2013

Ramesh, this is excellent piece! hmmmm so nice_Soul

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

an excellent poem. when it rains the sky cries.

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when the oceans weeps, it bursts into tears of volcanic eruption from the ground to call it Tsunami..a beautiful poem on impossibility..

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Dave Walker 17 May 2013

A great poem, like it.

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Shahzia Batool 13 May 2013

A poem is never finished, only abandoned...says Paul Valéry, .... so that's why it is continued! a deep and different poem!

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