Saturday, April 16, 2016

Tears Of Love. Why? Comments

Rating: 5.0

You kept saying that the price of love is tears
I kept thinking that now
With me you will have no need
to pay that price.
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Edward Kofi Louis 18 April 2016

Again and again! Nice work.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 16 April 2016

You kept saying that the price of love is tears I kept thinking that now With me you will have no need to pay that price. With me the sun shines On your happy face. For i would never let The dark vale, veil our Love. Nice lines... Your own fears. You let me in your walls, You wanted love. Now your fears, Fear me out. Have you thought that. The person i am. Who came to you. when you called, Would hurt you. These lines show your deep love for her and the sensitivity in you. Beautiful poem. Keep it up.10 for it.

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