Would you quit
rubbing love
to your heart?
Better
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heart burns brilliant being inflamed by love yet eyes looks red by tears losing love, .............................interesting write 10++.thanks for sharing
yes, must deserves it! ! ! ! Onion? ? ? ? Great like always! ! ! !
I enjoy this cutie poem especially the word... rub onion...so great! !
wonderful it reminds me one of Ozzy Osbourne's song named No More Tears. Mucho gracias meansm
Agree with you here Elena, the one thing which shouldn't make you cry always does - good one.
Ah i love this Elena, so profound and it's fit the meaning very well..great job! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! _Unwritten Soul
Ah you almost thumb your nose at the cupids bow... catch me if you can self sustaining and confident lines cheers
Elena, I love your analogy! Your words flow so easy, yet stick to my lips like honey. Great write! -Kelly.
quite interesting! don't wake sleeping babies by rubbing either. I just got one too. I enjoyed! thanks a lot!
LOVE IT