Monday, November 10, 2008

Tears Of Blood Tears Of Sorrow Comments

Rating: 3.9

Time flys leaving you.standing in the middle of the floor.

when you realize he's gone you fall hopping he will return.
(a Tear falls to the floor) and glass breaks.
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Lisa Bray
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Ryan Thompson 11 November 2008

O_o wow your deep :)

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Fiona Davidson 10 November 2008

Simply neautiful writing...thank you

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Billy Joe Collins 10 November 2008

wow what power in those words, great poem thanks for sharing

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Kallie Madison 10 November 2008

i love your poem and it's great........i love your poem. sweet but the silent truth of how i feel

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Lisa Bray

Lisa Bray

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