Tuesday, September 1, 2009

Tears Of Blood Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don’t you ever care?
While passing through this way
That Child’s feet are bare
And he can’t even say
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Irfan Salimi
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 September 2009

The tone you set up here was already made someones shed tears, I can feel the sadness all through.Good job Irfan, I love it.

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Marieta Maglas 01 September 2009

I like the last stanza: ''I found his heart got broken He succumbed to pain, he couldn’t bear His soul flied towards heaven But no one’s there to shed a tear. '' well written realistical poem....touching.........10+++++

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there is a poet in me! 01 September 2009

nice poem irfan... spl liked the last stanza.... keep up d good work...

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