I shrivel 'neath a scorching sun,
Devoid protection for my skin,
An aching grimace, I'll show none,
Worse burning pain suppurates within.
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Such a painfully graphic description of inner pain. Very dramatic, great structure - we can learn from you.
Oh! it's such an emotional and uplifting poem! not sad but very inspiring!
I wander naked through the rain! And traced her footsteps in the snow. Nice piece of work.
Wondering in rain and following footsteps give amazing feeling here definitely. Rambling lonely in wind also expresses humor. Very amazing poem this is really. Interesting sharing.10
I'm speechless! The imagery is stunning and your choice of words is beyond brilliant, I feel I can learn from the way you write. Thank you for sharing this masterpiece!
Many thanks Hazel for your heartwarming review....a compliment indeed coming from such a lovely writer.
I read this poem a couple of years ago. I'm glad I found it again. I think I will put it on my favorite poem list so it will be easy to find. Regards, Kim