Tears Of Acid Comments

excellent...the feeling flows thru your words..i won't say i enjoyed this read because if it is a true inner feeling one should not praise such hurting...but your writting is good...and i agree with Portia on her part about acid tear....but not on the part of a re-draft..one should never rephrase what they feel..or try to polish it up...if it is the words that move from your thoughts to the keyboard then they are you..don't re adjust your feeling....thanks for the reading.... ~^..^

I will give you a flower stop crying ok...lol well written

i like the title and the metaphor acid tear... you don't really connect acid tears to anything in the poem though... if you would have said i cry tears or named the poems tears, to me the meaning wouldn't change. I think you should try writing it again... (hope i don't sound harsh... don't mean to... its just that I like the idea, you just didn't bring it out in the poem.) : -) please write it again i'd love to read a second draft

Very pretty poem, all in all.