Tears Of A Wave Comments

Grains swept off the ground on a windy afternoon, Swirling in our repective freedom, And yet, Together we swirl.

A lovely poem about the short living waves who are a part of the big ocean and there they will remain for ever..... very nice

a great philosohical write. we are the part of creation. need not to fear

'we are just a part of the ocean and forever we will be' is the heart of the poem

really wonderful story))))) about our life))))) ....your words are reality of each person days))) (in some level)

We are like waves... The wind can throw us Where ever they like Till we vanish like others Rising new waves...! Nice way of feeling relieved from pains...!

Very philosophical write - the concept of the shining sea comes to mind. 'The dew is on the lotus, rise great sun and lift my leaf and mix me with the wave. Om mani padme hum, the sunrise comes, the dewdropp slips into the shining sea' - quote Lao Tse.

I'm glad somebody encouraged you. It's really a terrific verse and idea you've put into words more understandable than some before you have done.

Woa. I adored the story behind this and the way it applies to humans as well. We are all apart of something bigger so we should never fear death.