Monday, May 21, 2007

Tears Of A Rose Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today I seen a rose shed delicate tears
Crystal droplets falling from the petals
Shimmering against the sun light
Rainbows color grace the glow, beauty with sadness
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Patricia Gale
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I agree, beautiful. I found the language and images very fresh, original. Peace, L&T

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Amanda Bailey 26 September 2007

this is very beautiful nice job

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Melvina Germain 20 June 2007

Absolutely beautiful Patricia, fantastic imagry depicting a feeling of peace. I like this very much.--Melvina--

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Amandeep Singh 21 May 2007

wow! what a poem! nice poetry A true friend is he or She, Who sees the first tear in our eyes, Holds the next and ensures, that the third dropp of tears, May not come out of our eyes.

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