Thursday, April 5, 2012

Tears Of A Cloud Comments

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The tears of a cloud,
Fell on my face.
Leaving very little doubt,
That she felt out of place.
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Juan Olivarez
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Valerie Dohren 09 April 2012

A lovely poem, very well written.

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Heather Wilson 09 April 2012

Beautiful poem, it says it all, with such a nice flow.,

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Smoky Hoss 05 April 2012

Such a positive way of seeing the rain fall. It's great.

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Juan Olivarez

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