Monday, August 5, 2019

Tears Of A Broken Man Comments

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Time, you lousy being
Give me more of you I beg
Give me just enough to see her blink
Like she does in my dreams I beg
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Lehlohonolo Selai
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Chinedu Dike 25 December 2019

Well articulated and nicely penned in beautiful rhyme scheme with conviction. An insightful work of art, very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Hlompho Mohapi 05 August 2019

Wow, nice work. The poem speaks to people who have ears no matter what happens we will prevail.

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