Thursday, April 16, 2015

Tears Of A Broken Heart Comments

Rating: 4.5

A shed of tears
flowing down my face
my heart is bleeding
causing me to death.
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Joezel Jayme
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Ging Taping 17 April 2015

Move on my dear...his not worthy of your love..someday soon you will meet someone who will love you truly and cherish that love for the rest of your life.REMEMBER: true love will come in a right time

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Joezel Jayme 17 April 2015

Yes I am in the steps of moving on. Thanks for reading my poem...

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Akhtar Jawad 16 April 2015

Lines of the poem flow like waves of a river. A beautiful poem.......................10

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Joezel Jayme 17 April 2015

Thanks a lot

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Chinedu Dike 16 April 2015

Distress and heartache in bliss of love well depicted in the poem. A nice poem written from the heart. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Joezel Jayme 17 April 2015

Thank you. Sure I will read your poem.

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