Tears Fill these Crimson eyes,
from what you said,
or from this broken heart
or perhaps from the things you would not say,
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Wondrous, but wrong. Revenge is far from sweet, it is more of a bitter satisfaction. But the feeling of wishing revenge is portrayed perfectly in here =)
I am totally captured by this poem. I love your uniqueness with the crimson theme in your poetry. I find it amazing that one so young writes such intriguing poetry. No wonder you are on the top 500. DON'T EVER STOP WRITING! ! ! ! ! ! !
Wow! Crimson! The intense emotions shown in this write is absolutely amazing! If you were the only one in the whole World going through this particular situation, I would crown you The Goddess of Pain and Suffering! but there are so many right now going through the same and once they can read your always well penned writes, they fully identify with your deep feelings.10+++ Your life has become a reservoir of tears with your beautiful and sensitive heart flowing in the middle of it! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always!