Tears keep on fallen I lost my best aunty in the late 2005 in the cold December I lost my best uncle at the similar new year eve's lost out of no where in a land of lost
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Death lays its icy hands on the kings even, we are helpless, your strong feelings and love for the dearest persons lost has created a heart touching poem...............10
A nice lyrical piece. Sorry for yor losses but how u write poetry is a gain n so much finer. Gud to read u again poetess.
Emotionally strong ink.Very nice.Keep your pen bleeding Putri.
I have no one to share the lost I have no shoulder to lay my head I have no one to talk it through just to felt better at heart.... at the end. if you had a heart, you would have felt how............. complicated and sad emotions put together in life's real context. a very nice poem. i liked the simplicity of your verses. thank you dear poetess. tony