Tears In Sleep Comments

Poignant and deeply touching. Beautiful poem.

Congratulations being chosen as the Classic Poem Of The Day, most deserving!

Her ability is unique in its strict adherence to lyrical forms, while maintaining a high emotional pitch: she was preoccupied with exploring the perpetual disparity of heart and mind..5 Stars for this touching poem, exceptional

There is much in these lines, but I`ll say one thing. Grief can`t be false just as death can`t either. One can fake grief as one can fake death. But your words here of false grief sounds wrong. Grief as an absolute as death is, too, It can`t be false

Shed tears, like a task not to be put away- - In the false light, false grief in my happy bed, A labor of tears, set against joy's undoing./// excellent poetic expression on sadness

wow... I love this I would not wake at your words, I had tears to say... nice

Tears in sleep, I can relate to.this