I wish l could show you
how much it pains,
But you cannot see
my tears in the rains.
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The ease with which the poet has dieted to the rhyme scheme is admirable. Great work.
The pangs of separation are so real and searing, only the heart that suffers through, can understand. The hurt is stinging. Good emotional writing. Top score and onto Myfavourites
Emotions are as important as rain. A refreshing poem for a desert heart!