Friday, May 20, 2022

Tears In Rain Comments

Rating: 5.0

I wish l could show you
how much it pains,
But you cannot see
my tears in the rains.
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Miss Grace
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Rob Lamberton 08 May 2025

Emotions are as important as rain. A refreshing poem for a desert heart!

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The ease with which the poet has dieted to the rhyme scheme is admirable. Great work.

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The pangs of separation are so real and searing, only the heart that suffers through, can understand. The hurt is stinging. Good emotional writing. Top score and onto Myfavourites

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