You made me believe it was okay.
You made me feel accepted.
As my ego slide down through my feet
To say i am sorry
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My heart is hungry / Hungry for your forgiveness, So that tears in my heart will seize Seize to bleed again. / O! tears in my heart Strong...very strong the poetic personality you bear. Beautiful writing touches my own cry also. Keep your standard high to this height. Never I'll forget..MY HEART IS HUNGRY / HUNGRY FOR YOUR FORGIVENESS.....no escape I found here, but love is so loud....fantastic expression. Thank you.........more you write.......10++ Regards, pranab
Really fantastic. Vivid imagery and emotinal style. Nice write.
sincerly honest, beautifully evocative, uniquely outstanding..words are trite to describe the poem's beauty..., great POETS are born not made, hold fervently to your poetic aspirations. the concept of life is all about poetry..., write more to tell the world of the AFRICANS' inert 'poetic dreams'...that burns like the red ember in the kitchen...
A strong and evocative write. Quite similar to my own poem 'My Heart is Bruised Black and Blue' actually, keep following and writing from your heart. -Leslie
painful....i can feel it.....so i guess that means you did your job, you poet you
Creatively written and enjoyable to read. Love; D
awwwww.. this is very deep i can find so many words to tell you how beautiful this poem is. even the name gives it away. keep up the awesum poetry my friend :)
So sad and written from the heart.